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Jan Hoffman
{K:39467} 11/1/2007
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I don't mind re-posting but it was shot in RAW; the intermediate file before final step-down to posted JPG is a PSD file which already has all post-processing, i.e. crop + Neat Image filter action. I did not use smart objects or store history. Attached is a quick & dirty export from RAW. It shows the original format before the crop. I checked the EXIF and the actual focal length was 210 mm. --Jan
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![](http://thumbs.imageopolis.com/CritiqueImages/2/7/9/7/8/27978/7162517-TN.jpg) Nutty Boy in the RAW |
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ed silva
{K:651} 11/1/2007
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Great! care to post the original no PP ? Was it shot RAW or JPEG ?
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Jan Hoffman
{K:39467} 11/1/2007
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Thanks, Ed. Although it appears over-sharpened, there was minimal sharpening applied, which resulted from the default setting in the Neat Image processor to reduce noise. The well delineated eye and somewhat odd "look" resulted from the lens, a 75-300 Canon adjusted to about 250 mm. Part of the way it looks is the super shallow depth of field. Cropping was minimal but I don't recall how much was applied. Because Nutty Boy is camera shy I took this on the fly; a quick up with the camera and took the shot. By the time I took a second look, Nutty Boy was on his way up a tree. Shutter speed was slow ESPECIALLY with no IS. Thanks for the great comments. --Best regards, Jan
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ed silva
{K:651} 11/1/2007
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It seems over sharpened to me. Specially the eyes. It does not look natural. Unless this is the feel you were after. I would try again in better light. What focal length was it used ? at 300mm (420mm 1.6 crop) a 1/60 shutter seems slow even with IS on ( two stops ?)
Good try.
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Jan Hoffman
{K:39467} 10/31/2007
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Andree -- Thanks so much for commenting. --Best wishes, Jan
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andree lerat
{K:17476} 10/31/2007
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The eyes are perfect in this shot.
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Jan Hoffman
{K:39467} 10/30/2007
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Nessa -- Thanks so much for the kind words about the Nutty Boy picture. He is a sweet little guy that we all enjoy to watch. --Best to you, Jan
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vanessa shakesheff
{K:68840} 10/30/2007
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Looks 3D ..love the sharpness of the eyes ..beautiful capture...nessa
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Jan Hoffman
{K:39467} 10/26/2007
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Thanks so much for your kind words, Biljana. Meow back from Roland, hugs from me and Nutty Boy made a silly little squeak. :) :)
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biljana mitrovic
{K:48110} 10/26/2007
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I never had doubt you are animal lover my dear Jan.And I am very glad because of that,and I am very happy and proud to have such a wonderful man for a friend:)))
my best wishes to you ,Roland ,Nutty boy and everybody else whom surrounded you :))))
biljana
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Jan Hoffman
{K:39467} 10/23/2007
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Nacho -- Thanks so much! And Nutty Boy thanks you too. --Best to you, Jan
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Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia
{K:96391} 10/23/2007
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very cool. great. 7+++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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Jan Hoffman
{K:39467} 10/23/2007
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Srna -- Thank you so much for your nice comments. Nutty Boy is a big thief and for that we love him even more! --Hugs to you, Jan
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Srna Stankovic
{K:172232} 10/23/2007
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Wonderful it is your Nutty Boy my dear Jan ... enjoying in his stealing :))) You are so good man, happy is anyone who knows you !!! And blessed ! Fine shot and dof my dear, be well, hug Srna
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Jan Hoffman
{K:39467} 10/23/2007
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Thanks Nicole! We get much enjoyment from Nutty Boy along with his goofy brothers and sisters. --Best to you, Jan
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Nicole Besch
{K:72664} 10/23/2007
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Oh...how cute Jan:)))) Great macro shot and lovely details from nutty boy!! Very well done Cheers,Nicole
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Jan Hoffman
{K:39467} 10/23/2007
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Robert -- Thanks for checking out our "Nutty Boy" and for your comments. --Best to you, Jan
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Robert Gaither
{K:34128} 10/23/2007
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Nice squirrel and dof. I like it.
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Jan Hoffman
{K:39467} 10/23/2007
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Thanks Biljana. Other than being camera shy, Nutty Boy is very friendly. We put plenty out in the backyard for the birds and squirrels to eat; the squirrels think they are stealing (that is the fun for them) but in fact there is plenty to go around for all the little creatures. --Best to you, Jan
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biljana mitrovic
{K:48110} 10/23/2007
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Oh,Jan you are so lucky to have such a cute backyard friend(or not,if he is big thief:)) So very cute picture !!!I like it big hug my friend biljana
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Jan Hoffman
{K:39467} 10/22/2007
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Thanks Doyle. My back was against the wall (literally) and the light was low... Nutty Boy is camera shy so I snapped this one as fast I could get the camera up. The ISO was high, the aperture was at max and the focal length happened to be set for just over 200 mm. Without IS on this lens I was forcing the aperture to maximum and taking the highest the shutter would give me. Given to do over, I would trap Nutty Boy, tie him to a tree and walk out there and photograph him with another of my lenses. All above sound like excuses (NAH!) .... and they are. Nutty Boy will be mine some day for a quality photo!!! :) :) --Best to you, Jan PS -- Excellent critique!!
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Doyle D. Chastain
{K:101119} 10/22/2007
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Hi Jan! Well it seems the eye saves the shot to some degree here . . . good pose with the clutching hands and seeds . . . but the overall clarity seems to suggest a tad bit of movement has softened the image (outside of the eye). I'll offer a couple of suggestions for you to consider, though. First, I would certainly recommend increasing the shutter speed. Faster shutter speeds are more forgiving to slight motion. I'm sure that lens has the ability to adjust exposure to the faster shutter speed by a slight change in aperture. Second, don't close in too much, shoot back so as not to clip the feet and tail and fine tune the composition if needed by cropping. (Just a couple of thoughts for you to consider . . . ).
Overall, cute shot of a cute animal and decent DOF! :)
Regards, Doyle I <~~~~~
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Jan Hoffman
{K:39467} 10/22/2007
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Pablo -- Thank you very much for your comment. --Best regards, Jan
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Pablo Dylan
{K:63918} 10/22/2007
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Great capture my friend.
Pablo
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Jan Hoffman
{K:39467} 10/22/2007
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Barbara -- Thanks so much for commenting on my little friend, Nutty Boy. He is camera shy but otherwise friendly; just afraid of cameras. I have several squirrel feeders out back in addition to the bird feeders. N.B. is especially fond of peanuts. --Best regards, Jan
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{K:12494} 10/21/2007
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This is a cute capture, sharp, great detail and clarity, excellent job. 7+++++++++++++++=
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