Charlie is a very lovely lady. Your presentation of her photo could be better, IMHO. I really like the lighting, I think I would have had the light line not catch her hair, although that's personal taste. And I echo Mr. William's comment about seeing her closer, might be more intimate. Keep 'em coming. Regards, Randal Dean
I think she is a beautiful and natural model. But I wonder why she is placed right of center, rather than left, when her head is facing to our right? This makes her look somehow cramped for space. And raises the question of what that empty space on the left is doing. With such a beautiful woman, I think I would have wanted to take the photo from much closer. With the quality of the Mamiya lens and the 6 x 4,5 MF negative, you could have given us sensational skin, eyes, hair... Perhaps there will be other opportunities? I hope so. (Another picture of your wife's sister came up among "Random Photos" just now, the one where she is looking around a corner, and that brought me to your portfolio.)
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