this is the best lighting ive seen you use... nice even, no distracting shadows, dont get me wrong, shadows can be awesome but they also cannot distract and if thats your intention be sure to make it clear... not like you just goofed up by not paying attention to your light source... this image, i like the light... great use of natural light, maybe a flash or small strobe... worked well, i enjoy the metal poles framing her, it's very creative, but the depth of field i dont like to much, you need to blur that background more bcz it is distracting, good work though, keep shooting, looks like you shoot all the time :)
Ok, this is a fabulous one... As mentioned before.. the spokes really lead your eye to the model. The way the model is leaning forward in about the same angle as the bottom spoke on the front is simply great. Colors and lighting are great too. A good expression on her face, and a great little twinkle in her eyes. Just a thought to try perhaps is to crop a little different, a little less on the bottom, to show the tips of her hair, and maybe also (if it would've been possible) have her head tilted down a little more, so her ear is visible.
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