Hmm I like the way her legs are posed. Very sensual. But she is looking in the camera and I think this takes away from her legs, and her overal pose. I like the choice for red. On my monitor her hair blends in with the shadow a bit. Overal a nice image, but I think a couple of things can be improved.
Welcome to usefilm! I'm known for my extreme hatred for studio lighting, but I love this one! I think the huge logo might interfere with the shot a bit, but it's still a nice shot. Good work!