Thanks for the feedback. I agree the right side of her face is a bit too bright, Cathy was having fun and moving around during the shoot, which lead to the great pose, but unfortunately, she moved closer to the light while doing so. It's something I'll be more conscious of in the future. And thanks for the tip about the powder. More to come soon.
Hi Michael, I really like the composition and her pose. The light too bright on her face, try pulling the light back. I think the image would be more powerful with her hands in focus as well. The face painting is very interesting, but some powder (or something like that - I'm no makeup artist) is needed to prevent the shine.
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