I like the combination of images here Elangovan, the texture is good, maybe a slight turn of the head and not such a bold stare may have worked a little better, but still good work.
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Marc Gougenheim{K:5398} 11/22/2002
I like it. What could have been better ? Technically, nothing, I think. Maybe the expression could be a bit stronger. Maybe you cropped a bit to high at the bottom - the neck in full was maybe better. As for the top, maybe we didn't need that much of empty space. But all these are small matters. The picture still works, and is pretty impactful. Regards.
Thanks Deb and Joffre, I am glad you liked the concept and the shot.
I agree with Joffre, I could have made my eyes little blank and away from the camera. I debated on the look - should I look into the viewer or away... OK... will try again, hopefully, i will improve on certain things, starting from my cloth, eyes, instead of tree, i would also like to have a cracked floor and such... I have ideas, need time and energy to execute them...
Elangovan, I applaud your implementation of a concept that's difficult to concretize. Perhaps if the man's eyes weren't staring so fixedly at the viewer the idea of "thought" would be better conveyed ... congratulations, good work.
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