Hey, Well I got the original one (and 4 virussus, but that problem is solved). I think you did well to change the photo into B&W, the original one has some strange effects that remind me of a to large contrast (mainly in the center from the lighter spot to the left). In B&W the upper part of the picture looks very intresting, but the lower part in kind of 'dull' all black. Maybe next time you should shoot a little higher so there is a lower horizon (a centert horizon looks very flat and normal). These are just some suggestions, from a non-landscape photographer, so don't blaime me for errors. A friend of mine, Andrej VOH makes excellent landscapes, maybe he can give help.
It seem to dark, but I like that. It's a very nice view and well suited for B&W, but still I wonder how it would have looked in color. Good work. Greets Tim.