This picture is supposed to illustrate the intimacy between people when they are in love.When two bodies become one and there is noting inthe world but love.
The models are at the time of the photo placed on a couple of red carpets on my livingroomfloor. No light exept one simple flash is used.
It is a very tender capture. I think it is a very fine idea, but that the realization can be improved a little exactly as Vesa suggests. Her smile reminded me of a scene from the movie "Amelie" in which the protagonist giggles while being "made love to".
That flash created reflection on her skin is too rough. More indirect flash, or some other light too might have been better. Or at least I don't like that flash reflection.
They are quite intimate, woman seems to be almost laughing. Luckily her eyes are closed so it seems she is more enjoying her time.
I'd crop picture from right until the border touches her hand to tighten the mood.