City - Jonndulup State - WESTERN AUSTRALIA Country - Australia
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here is lovely Zafirah she isnt happy because in the room across there is a party going on with much older kids and she wants to join in, i think its a cute pic, maybe a bit soft because of the low lighting and the fact that camera is so heavy and I had no tripod or monopod
Very nice composition and expression. It seems that the main focus is on her shoulder, and I think it would have been better to be on her face. The same with the lighting-for me she needs a touch more on her face. Very appealing photo.
Very good emotive portrait, Susie! I like the composition, and the clearly visible (and recognisable) disappointment in her eyes. The light striking her right sholder is very good, but I would've liked to see a tad more (selective) lighting on her face. The colours in this portrait seem a bit dull...
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