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Ursula Luschnig
{K:21723} 6/15/2004
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Nice idea,toning and composition,as for the technical details,everything is already said by Hugo.
Regards,Ursula
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Pim de Ruijter
{K:2170} 6/15/2004
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I tried to remove the black spot in the right top edge, as you can see on this photo. It isn't superb, but I'm working on it.
Pim
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Pim de Ruijter
{K:2170} 6/15/2004
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Hi Gerhard! I will try to make it a little lighter in PS! Thanks for your comment! :)
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Lou Dina
{K:12194} 6/15/2004
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Nice design, Pim. I like it in B&W. Great shape and form. Lou
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Hugo de Wolf
{K:185110} 6/15/2004
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Hi Pim, Very stron still life, and a very well balanced composition. The dynamism, not only created by the shape of the lever, but also by the deliberate camera tilt and the shallow DOF is excellent. I only find the top right edge where the knob on the lever intersects with the edge of the table a tad distracting. It would've been nice if the table extended a bit more. The textures of the cast iron in the foreground is beautiful, very well exposed. My compliments...;o)
Cheers,
Hugo
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Gerhard Hoogterp
{K:4863} 6/15/2004
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Mooi, but I think again a bit too dark. There's hardly detail left in the bottom dark area. I do like the grain and the composition though.. Very nice..
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