Ben, Thank you for all of your comments. I have been working to try and get the details better. Now, if I only had the money to go to film school and to purchase the PS software I'd be in great shape! I do appriciate your comments though, and will keep them in mine when I take my pictures.
When you compose the shot, try to line the horizon so it is straight. This is one of first things you learn in photo school. Other than the photo is a pinch soft, and this could be the Sony, I like the idea and comp.
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