I've been away from usefilm for a bit but today got caught up in it. You have some wonderful pictures in your portfolio. I want to comment on this shot and in general on weddings. I don't shoot them anymore but I've done hundreds.
OK, first off when you resized this image your distorted it, it's stretched up and down. Also, helping your couple feel their love will help a lot. They look like you told them to "put your arms around each other like this". Instead, ask him to "hold" his lovely bride and ask her to pull her man in..." something like that. I also don't think you need frame props like this. Let your images speak for themselves. Just some thoughts...hope it was helpful.
Mandy ..... Always use the bride's flowers ... in photos where they are together .. in this case .. it would be held at waist level by both bride and groom. .. Also turn their heads more toward the camera and tilted toward each other. When his head will be tilted .. you may get rid of the reflection in his glasses. Then.."voila" .. a beautiful bride/groom portrait.