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emily savva
{K:21113} 10/4/2004
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overall it is a great portrait (if she was a bit more relaxed it would be perfect)... i can?t believe that you spotted exactly what was wrong about the lighting on her face because i was looking for it (before i have read your comment).... very well seen dear Jeff and i love your honest try for continuous improvement... keep up the good work!!!!! lol... emy
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Jeff Fiore
{K:11277} 10/3/2004
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Karen, Good eyes - something bothered me about the photo also - especially the face. That's why I posted it - to get peoples reactions. Upon studying it now for a while, the problem is with the lighting - it is casting a shadow where there should not logically be a shadow. Her left eye is in shadow but the left side of her nose and head are lit. Her laying down toward the camera along with her slight turn of the head was enough to place her slightly ahead of the side light.
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Stephen Bivens
{K:7308} 10/3/2004
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Sexy shot/
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karen clarke
{K:18893} 10/3/2004
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Not sure about this composition, the arm cut off by the frame on the right appears a bit odd. Something about the face looks a bit strange, I think that the eyes appear a bit too soft. I do agree with Patrick, after a few more times I am sure she will start to become a bit more comfortable~
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Patrick Jacobson
{K:29151} 10/2/2004
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You took alot of good shots of her.. =)
Great tones and light.. abit bright on some parts but it still works. Perhaps not the best expression from her.. she can do better! =) Good pose and framing.
Keep it up my friend! =)
Patrick J
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Rebecca Raybon
{K:26654} 10/2/2004
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I think Daisy just looks better in color. Period! She has beautiful skin tones that get lost in the bw. Great pose.
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Guido Tweepenninckx
{K:20076} 10/1/2004
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lovely lady Jeff
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Gertrud Gozner
{K:14222} 10/1/2004
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beautiful portrait and nice framing!
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Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia
{K:96391} 10/1/2004
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magnificent. 7
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Michele Berti
{K:14921} 10/1/2004
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Beautiful portrait Jeff: great in composition, well focussed over her eyes, great lightening, sharp and clean. Excellent to me.
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Howie Mudge
{K:27933} 10/1/2004
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Good capture and Daisy works for me :) Nice light and composition, works well.
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