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Rebecca Raybon
{K:26654} 12/30/2004
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I have to say, the gaze disturbs me too.. needs to be more towards the viewer. The right wrist, not good also. She doesn't really look relaxed. On the good side.. I think the skin tones are lovely, except for the hands. ANd she looks great in black. I hope you don't mind my saying what I realy think. Many times, women don't comment on this type portrait, only men. I try to express what women may think :)
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John Fiore
{K:1077} 12/30/2004
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Thanks for the comment Bryan.
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Bryan Steffy
{K:4910} 12/30/2004
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John, the eyes are a bit distracting for me, not because they are over sharpened or anything, but where her eyes are gazing. not that i am a purist when it comes to portraiture, but i think if her gaze was more towards the viewer, maybe not straight on, but not so exagerated.... i do like the lighting and tones and what i have seen of your other work is superb.... bryan
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John Fiore
{K:1077} 12/30/2004
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Thanks Joe, I'll do that to the original. I also don't like the wrist on the right hand.
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Joe Stewart
{K:1908} 12/30/2004
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A little on the hot side for me, her left hand and the tones in her skin need to be warmer
Joe
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John Fiore
{K:1077} 12/30/2004
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Thanks David. The whole picture was sharpened slighly. The whites of the eyes where brought out a bit. maybe that's what causing it to look like they're over sharpened????
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David Vorland
{K:-1341} 12/30/2004
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Very nice. Eyes perhaps a tad oversharpened?
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Miguel Andrade
{K:5463} 12/30/2004
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Very good portrait...
Regards, Miguel
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