At a local comic expo in Austin Tx. A dad sharing his love of comics with his daughter, also the requirement for any comic expo, the man in black. :-) Thanks for looking.
There is a very nice flow created here by the paper and the three people, like an backward "S," and this is terrific either by design or an unconscious choice on your part. Engaging story and composition. The blur on the child could be considered by some to be unfortunate, but it's o.k. by me. The title names her as the focal point, which usually wouldn't be out of focus, so perhaps this would seem to be less of an issue if the image had a different name, but I couldn't come up with a better one.
Rofl - excellent composition, Mark - this is a street shot with stories, even if it's indoors. Gotta love dad spending time with his daughter and teaching her a nice hobby - and the man in black is subdued today. Good eye!
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Cheryl Ogle{K:24494} 3/6/2005
Very Mall Rat of you! Love it Mark, she's soooo into it - look at her face, it's mesmerized.