First time shooting a male model, well not quiet a model it was his time, I found him on one of those interenet sites, I think it turned out ok, I used the stadard flash off the 20D to light him up because my flash gun was to slow and the batteries were running out and I didnt have any spares so I got rid of it.
For this being your first time shootin a male model, you did a great job! Were filters used? I love the angle, and the dark sky. Very well composed! Can't wait to see how your work progresses! Good luck!