I'm so glad to see you - and my favourite dog model - here (probably to see myself here would be a better expression though;) The human stare of your model is here as usual, but I am missing something in the left part of the shot. You are good at working with empty spaces yet it does not show here. My idea would be to cut it into a tight square full of dog and ball;) - but that would be a completely different picture, of course. cheers!