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Stefan Engström
{K:24473} 9/20/2004
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Thank you Becky for the thoughtful critique. All points are well taken.
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Becky V
{K:9699} 9/20/2004
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From the technical side of things, I'd say you rose to this particular black and white challenge quite well. The exposure and the contrast looks great and there's a great balance between light and shadow without one overwhelming the other. I would prefer to see a bit more detail in the foreground woodpiece. I have a feeling it's there . . . could you try to coax it out a little?
I can appreciate what you are doing with this shot compositionally. The context is nice, especially with the aforementioned light/dark contrasts. I do feel this photo would have more impact if the subject piece of wood was closer/filled more of the frame. I suppose that's fairly cliche though . . . perhaps a vertical shot? Hmmm . . . At the very least, I feel the right part of the photo should be cropped to eliminate the white branch tips. I really like their white glow, but I feel they're in that limbo state between being in the photo and not being in the photo. :-)
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Jeanette Hägglund
{K:59855} 9/17/2004
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Hmm, cool stubbe, bra komposition och härligt ljus genom löven.
Jeanette
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Stefan Engström
{K:24473} 9/13/2004
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Hi Thilo. I guess I just have to go back... Thanks.
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Stefan Engström
{K:24473} 9/13/2004
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Hi Verena - made you look! Thanks :-)
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Thilo Bayer
{K:50358} 9/13/2004
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Hi Stefan,
really strange natural phenomenon. personally, I would love to see a "look-thru" picture (with the tree in the middle and more zoomed in) and a stronger DOF.
take care,
thilo
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Verena Rentrop
{K:15233} 9/13/2004
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my eyes concentrates on one point, guess where ;)
great shot
Cheers,
Verena
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b y
{K:2671} 9/13/2004
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Like the picture, the piece infront..is it a piece of a hollow tree? Works well with the fallen tree in the backgroud & the light.
Grs Ed
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emily savva
{K:21113} 9/13/2004
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beautifull composition and an excellent use of DOF... love the lighting and all those little details in the front that you can wonder your eyes on them over and over again... great image!!!! regards... emy
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John McCallum
{K:1856} 9/13/2004
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Hello Stefan, you have reatined deatil in the shadows nicely. Good point of view. regards, John.
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