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Critique By:
coskun o (K:1812)
7/12/2003 9:18:08 AM
what better words could be said after God's?
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| Photo By: Cole Petersburg
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Critique By:
Koen B (K:3279)
4/30/2002 3:46:57 AM
Interesting shot. The centre of interest is clearly defined. The cracks and tilted view make it very dynamic. The texture of the road makes it complete. I'm always fascinated how at first sight boring objects can be composed into a photograph with an exciting composition !
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Critique By:
Kevin J. Pellerine (K:484)
4/27/2002 6:26:10 PM
An immediate smile came forth as this came into view. I like the slight tilt to the sidewalk that you have brought forth through your composition of the scene. the cracks work well working from OOF to sneak up on the cover. Interesting piece to say the least, enjoyable as well. Thank you!
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Critique By:
Cole Petersburg (K:49)
3/9/2002 11:26:28 PM
Yeah, that could be good. I didn't put a lot of thought into it at the time; I just wanted to finish a roll. I cropped it down to see what it would look like in a vertical format, and I don't really like it that way. I like how the frame and the bottle have opposing axes. I recreated it with my camera too. The bottle then has the same proportions as the frame. Somehow it seems monotonous. Put your hands up on your monitor and see if it's better. Just personal preference, I guess.
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Critique By:
Phillip Filtz (K:1792)
3/9/2002 9:13:04 PM
Cole,, Interesting shot, however; there's quite a bit of dead space left and right of the bottle. Maybe a vertical to one side or the other?
Regards,
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Critique By:
Anne Brown (K:833)
3/9/2002 3:21:41 PM
Thanks for sharing your experience about what inspired you to become more interested in photography. You pose an interesting question...
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Critique By:
Cole Petersburg (K:49)
3/8/2002 9:18:26 PM
Ah now I see the problem. The Epson Perfection 1240U which I'm using at a computer lab has a blind spot along the edge. I'll upload the fixed one tomorrow.
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Critique By:
Cole Petersburg (K:49)
3/8/2002 9:09:44 PM
I totally agree. This image is what convinced me to use manual focus. At the time I took it, I hadn't a clue about photography.
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Critique By:
Cole Petersburg (K:49)
3/8/2002 8:47:58 PM
Are you objecting on my use of the word "chose?" If you're asking for clarification, you should pose a clear question. The autofocus randomly picked a spot to focus on. That's what autofocus does.
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Critique By:
Cole Petersburg (K:49)
2/26/2002 11:13:49 PM
I agree about the top of the bottle. Wow yeah. The print has just the right amount above the cap, but it seems I should rescan. There's no balance between top and bottom.
I didn't even see the left-right thing until I saw the print. I kinda like it. I think it's the lensing effect of the water.
Sometime in the next month I may take a different B&W shot of the bottle. In the mornings I can use the left window as a reflector along with the sunlight coming in through the right window.
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Critique By:
Scott Jones (K:1093)
2/26/2002 10:42:13 PM
Like the subject matter, but the composition doesn't grab me. Maybe it is the split screen effect with the balck area to the right and the window area to the left and the top of the bottle cut off. Perhaps a different angle. I too like this type of subject matter!
Scott
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Critique By:
michaelle . (K:3807)
2/20/2002 5:40:32 PM
I keep coming back to this... one can almost feel those roots trying to push up through the asphalt. Nice!
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