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Critique By:
György Szönyi (K:10011)
9/18/2005 9:19:06 PM
Nicely arranged still life!
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| Photo By: Stefano Bramato
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Critique By:
Stefano Bramato (K:601)
9/18/2005 9:08:48 PM
Si!
Fichi d'india belli e saporiti...e co cosa ne è rimasto...
ciao e grazie!
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| Photo By: Stefano Bramato
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Critique By:
Michele Berti (K:14921)
9/18/2005 9:01:10 PM
fichi d'india? molto bella, complimenti
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| Photo By: Stefano Bramato
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Critique By:
Sally Morgan (K:9219)
9/14/2005 9:02:27 PM
What a super shot! I've never seen a Holga - only pictures taken by them here on usefilm - this one is particulary nice.
The vignette effect really works well on this photo - almost like an ND filter for the sky.
I like the composition - it's simple but striking, and I like your choice of frame too - it really compliments your photo.
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| Photo By: Stefano Bramato
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Critique By:
Caterina Berimballi (K:27299)
9/14/2005 2:23:37 AM
Looks like Harry Potter! lol
Cheers
Rina
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Critique By:
Mohsen Bayramnejad (K:21377)
9/12/2005 9:58:21 PM
very nice and dramatic shot...great color and lighting,
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Critique By:
Stefano Bramato (K:601)
7/18/2005 9:39:16 PM
Thanks Angelo for all the words you wrote to me.
This picture is scanned from a straight contactprint witout any correction, so the final correction in contrast as needed and sugegsted, will be done in the final print.
Of course, next time i will wipe out the dust from the scans... 
Thanks again,
Stefano
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Critique By:
Angelo Villaschi (K:49617)
7/17/2005 7:01:09 AM
Stefano,
An interesting environmental portrait you have here. The craftsman is busy at work and very concentrated, so psychologically we are immediately drawn to his task. What is he doing with such intent?
The slight motion blur is fine: it shows that some action is going on. I also like the lighting, which is natural.
One thing that might improve may be a boost in contrast - a different grade of paper, perhaps?
One thing that you may be able to improve is the quality of the scanning. There are a lot of scratches and dust marks. In a real print, you would retouch the print. So in this case, of a digital presentation, why not use Photoshop to retouch those little blemishes out?
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Critique By:
Onur Türkyılmaz (K:13)
7/11/2005 9:24:35 PM
You'r very hungry I think.
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Critique By:
Jamey Zunz (K:1049)
7/6/2005 11:07:27 PM
I love the bandages on his knuckles...I hope they are pre-emptive.
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Critique By:
Jamey Zunz (K:1049)
7/6/2005 11:06:08 PM
I've often thought this might be the perfect career path....
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Critique By:
Stefano Bramato (K:601)
7/6/2005 12:08:05 PM
Angelo,
thanks for your words.
In this case is almost impossible to have more details in highlights because, i.e. shines on the threads, it felt lot above the zone X.
This was a very difficult shot because of very low contrast backgrounds (various brownn tints and paints) and on the other hand a very contrasty object with shines and shades.
So i choose a underexposing and overdelepoing to raise more general contrast. And the lock was in dark chamber espoed with different c. grade...
Also slightly toned...
A lot of work!
it is not perfect and I know but is my best in this challenge!!
Thanks for suggestion in exposure, i will try again.
Thanks again and visit me soon!!
Ciao,
Stefano
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Critique By:
Angelo Villaschi (K:49617)
7/6/2005 11:45:19 AM
Another nice detail shot. Your portfolio is full of nicely though out compositions, and it also shows in this photo, of a different subject (for you).
I like your placement of the lines and shapes, it all works to attract the attention to the small objects.
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Critique By:
Angelo Villaschi (K:49617)
7/6/2005 11:43:14 AM
Stefano,
I like simple detail shots such as this one. You have picked an interesting subject full of possibilities. Nice work.
I won't ask you about your processing and toning techniques because I was never any good in the wet darkroom.
Just one thing: to me some of the highlights are a bit overexposed. I'd like to see detail on the threads for example. I think this has more to do with the original exposure than any processing.
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Critique By:
Mohamed Banna (K:34237)
7/5/2005 4:43:42 PM
great and nice
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Critique By:
Mahamed Ariffin (K:7114)
7/5/2005 12:50:43 PM
Stefano, you have good eyes! And very effective cropping, too.
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Critique By:
Stefano Bramato (K:601)
7/5/2005 12:42:03 PM
thanks. hope you will like this crop inside a photoframe!!ciao
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Critique By:
metoni . (K:24727)
7/5/2005 12:35:51 PM
nice croping!
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Critique By:
Mark Beltran (K:32612)
7/5/2005 6:30:24 AM
extraordinary shot!
Ciao, Mark
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Critique By:
Mark Beltran (K:32612)
7/5/2005 6:27:29 AM
Always good to see you work with the Rolleiflex. Very original; so very unique.
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Critique By:
Stefano Bramato (K:601)
6/29/2005 7:19:04 AM
Steve,
what does it means your quote?
Do you like te picture or not?
Ciao,
Stefano
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Critique By:
Steve Williams (K:1341)
6/29/2005 3:47:14 AM
ah yes an artist at work..times 2
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Critique By:
Paolo De Maio (K:34932)
6/27/2005 1:01:25 PM
In questa però la sfocatura non rende giustizia all'azione.
con la focheggiatura sulle mani del maestro liutaio la foto avrebbe raggiunto livelli di gradimento altissimi.
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Critique By:
Paolo De Maio (K:34932)
6/27/2005 12:59:19 PM
Stupendo il lavoro e berllissima la realizzazione fotografico degli step per arrivare al prodotto finito..
Gran bel lavoro Stefano.
Complimenti a te e al tuo Maestro liutaio!!!
Paolo
P.S:
Gran bel basso!!
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Critique By:
Stefano Bramato (K:601)
5/18/2005 10:40:12 PM
hi Lea thanks for your comment.
Why pink tone?
simple. the print was selenium toned, and this is the result!!
Ciao,
Stefano
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Critique By:
Lea Mulqueen (K:7396)
5/18/2005 10:00:42 PM
A very nice environmental portrait. I think the pink tone detracts. Why not b&w or sepia?
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Critique By:
Marilyn Nagy (K:6008)
5/16/2005 3:56:40 AM
Stefano, Nice portrait of your friend. Marilyn
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Critique By:
Vasso Stamoulis (K:1072)
5/9/2005 11:56:09 AM
I love the sun on white and blue sky,very good shot
Vasso
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Critique By:
Mark Julian (K:36866)
5/8/2005 12:08:51 PM
Great shot - wonderful composition and color ! mark
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Critique By:
Mark Julian (K:36866)
5/8/2005 12:06:35 PM
Nice one of The Palace of Culture ? (I think That's it. Haven't visited since '91) Like what you did with it. Great composition and look to it. Fine work, Mark
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