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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/21/2005 1:16:45 PM
beautiful.
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| Photo By: Jim Christensen
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/20/2005 10:11:59 PM
George, this is a great shot both of poeple and effect with the play off the glass.
As for the composition, the photo would get to the next level if you could see all of the doors and maybe a little of the ground to see the connection of their images to 'the street'.
Nonetheless a great capture.
And thanks for the comments to me.
ab
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Photo By: George Black
(K:102014)
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/20/2005 2:11:07 AM
another 1000 words to go along w/ 1000 memories. excellent!!
ab
altre 1000 parole da andare avanti con 1000 memorie. eccellente!!
(sorry if the translation is poor)
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| Photo By: soul 21
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/20/2005 2:06:02 AM
hey chad - i like the simplicity of the colors (greens, white and shadows). i think a simple frame would set it off nicely. and don't be afraid to get out your clippers next time to cut what you don't want out. it's easier than the clone tool in PS, as it is it's just clover and i'm trying to get rid of a ton of it im my own yard. i like it.
ab
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| Photo By: Chad Parish
(K:335)
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/16/2005 3:37:33 AM
Hansel and Gretel's path wasn't so obvious but their forest was probably as moody. This image pulls my imagination into it.
ab
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| Photo By: Sean Nel
(K:557)
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/15/2005 9:44:45 PM
Andrzej - your photos are provacative and i like the thought in them. was the light in this space really so weightless? thank you for bringing tunesia to all of us.
ab
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| Photo By: Andrzej Krok
(K:63)
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/15/2005 2:28:17 PM
Chad - thanks for the comments. I think we share a similar take on compsition and subjects. looking forward to seeing more of your work.
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| Photo By: allan basik
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/15/2005 1:56:03 AM
truly 1000 words. excellent.
ab
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| Photo By: soul 21
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/15/2005 1:24:17 AM
LMP - great work with these kids, you have captured their spirit in many facets. it looks as if all were having a great time and your talent brings it out strong.
keep it up.
ab
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| Photo By: Larry Monserate Piojo
(K:10780)
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/15/2005 1:15:09 AM
Thank you Gabry.
I'm happy to know you enjoy some of my world.
Your photos are excellent and your country is beautiful. Keep sharing it with all of us.
ab
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| Photo By: allan basik
(K:434)
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/12/2005 3:19:47 PM
Aaron - thanks for comment, i'm glad you like it. i'm not sure what you meant exactly about the composition, but i played with it a little. take a look.
thanks
ab
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| Photo By: allan basik
(K:434)
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/12/2005 2:57:56 PM
Thanks Ben.
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| Photo By: allan basik
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/12/2005 2:30:17 PM
Chris - how did you get the duck to complete your triangle?! he must be well trained.
I really like the compsition (chairs-valley-duck) and how the eye is kept moving. I only wish there were more shoulders (wider angle) and with that more sky. And the colors are nice and cool accentuated by the red. nice going.
ab
ps thanks for noticing 'discarded'
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| Photo By: chris deuel
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/12/2005 1:32:30 AM
Here is the copy.
ab
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| Photo By: Michael Kanemoto
(K:22115)
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/12/2005 1:28:25 AM
Micheal, I hope I'm not being pesky, nor do I wish to ruin your beautiful photo.
However, I was intrigued by your posts w/Carston re: PS and how much is too much, along w/ what it can and can't do for a photo. My question is what did the original of 'Union Station' look like and how much PS did you use to get the final result? Also, any tips on PS learning resourses?
With regards to your photo I really liked this one and took the liberty of experimenting in PS with it. I'm not sure I really like this over the original but would like your thoughts.
Regards and good hunting (photos).
ab
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| Photo By: Michael Kanemoto
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/11/2005 11:55:51 PM
micheal - thanks for the thoughts.
the photo is the original color shot i took one late night at the office, and no PS was done to it.
below is a quick study having rotated it to near vertical and giving it more contrast/less brightness.
the original shows all of the subject matter and trying to move the verticals to 1/3 or 1/4 removes (i believe) too much of it. but i do agree that more attention paid to the proportion would produce a more settled image.
again, thanks
ab
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| Photo By: allan basik
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/9/2005 4:25:42 PM
Thanks for sharing your thoughts Peter, maybe it is a little to bright however, I was going for exageration in color and dof. The color of these azaleas are pretty intense to begin with.
Please keep enjoying, I do enjoy yours.
thanks again
ab
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| Photo By: allan basik
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/7/2005 1:53:34 AM
make it a double - its been a long day 
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| Photo By: larry white
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/7/2005 12:03:11 AM
thanks for noticing. your florals are wonderful as well.
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| Photo By: allan basik
(K:434)
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
4/6/2005 9:16:45 PM
Thanks for the feedback.
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| Photo By: allan basik
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
3/21/2005 4:10:02 AM
thank you
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| Photo By: allan basik
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
3/18/2005 4:01:57 PM
i'm assuming this is a funeral for a fire fighter, to which i have great respect.
how about "reverence"
ab
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| Photo By: Richard Fraginals
(K:83)
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
3/18/2005 3:34:09 PM
very nice capture - very graphic.the silver car worked out perfect. congrats.
ab
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| Photo By: vetro .
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
3/18/2005 3:14:01 AM
Lara, i love how you saw this hint of eros in the original and turned it the seductive picture it is now. I'd have to say you had intimate knowledge of sorts it is definately better w/o the color.
ab
ps. thanks for the remarks on 'fingers' i'm going to do some slight modifications now.
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| Photo By: Lara dos Santos
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
3/18/2005 3:02:30 AM
i like the focus on the pots. with the green next to them but not in them.
ab
thanks for the comments on the palms..
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| Photo By: Scott Brown
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
3/18/2005 2:57:55 AM
very very nice
ab
thanks for the observation on dark passage.
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| Photo By: Eugenio Mussini
(K:191)
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
3/18/2005 2:53:26 AM
i like this strange obscure gaze.
ab
thanks for the comment on dark passage.
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| Photo By: Fabio Keiner
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
3/18/2005 2:49:48 AM
thanks for looking.
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| Photo By: allan basik
(K:434)
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
3/18/2005 2:21:44 AM
excellent composition - i love the way the mountain cradles the sun and funnels its light down into the lake. beautiful.
ab
ps. thanks for comments on morning bath.
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| Photo By: Roberto Arcari Farinetti
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Critique By:
allan basik (K:434)
3/18/2005 2:11:33 AM
excellent photo. I think it captures the clean feeling in the air after a storm. very clean and fresh. thanks for commenting on morning bath.
ab
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