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Critique By:
frank wolf (K:5392)
4/23/2010 12:31:15 PM
that`s rockn` roll!
yours
frank
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Critique By:
Steve Aronoff (K:18393)
1/15/2009 12:50:16 AM
This is a very funny image, Susan. My only critique is that the background is too busy and draws my attention away from the subject. Blurring it somehow would help, I think.
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Critique By:
Steve Aronoff (K:18393)
12/16/2008 12:10:13 AM
An interesting sculpture you've captured here, Susan. I like the colors. I think the basic problem of the photo is that there is too much and too detailed a background for the busts. You might try rephotographing the sculpture from a different angle so that the background is more upstreet and less likely to have a distracting background. I suggest looking at the sculpture from the left. The other aspect is that the dark faces of the busts are lost against the lighter background. You could try using a fill flash to lighten the faces up a bit.
Steve
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Critique By:
Byron Dudley (K:257)
11/10/2008 7:50:30 PM
Very nice, the B&W with tinting works well here complimenting skin tones and water.
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Critique By:
Byron Dudley (K:257)
11/10/2008 7:47:34 PM
Very nice, you captured the moment. I get a feel for what it was like to be there.
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Critique By:
Byron Dudley (K:257)
11/10/2008 7:44:40 PM
I think you captured the mood and feel of your subjects, but between the two men is a lot of blown highlight in the grass. Also it's always a personal preference but maybe cropping the vehicles out above the bald headed gentlemen would help focus the viewer more to the subject. The dog for me adds a little humor to the image, as if these guys aren't taking themselves to seriously.:) keep shooting
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Critique By:
Carmen Fuchs (K:6967)
8/22/2008 10:24:16 PM
Stay strong, June. Nice to see a happy moment, Susan. =)
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Critique By:
frank wolf (K:5392)
7/30/2008 12:56:31 PM
these pics tell me, that she was a very interesting person.
best wishes to her family.
yours
frank
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Critique By:
frank wolf (K:5392)
7/30/2008 12:54:25 PM
it is hard to find words. a picture that touches my heart. congrats.
yours
frank
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Critique By:
frank wolf (K:5392)
7/30/2008 12:50:23 PM
whenever i should like to have a tattoo, he would be the one to do it.... ))
yours
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Critique By:
frank wolf (K:5392)
7/30/2008 12:48:07 PM
fine colours and a nice impression.
yours
frank
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Critique By:
Olga Vareli (K:22477)
7/23/2008 12:13:04 PM
she...died?I am sooo sorry...
God bless you!
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Critique By:
susan scott (K:714)
7/22/2008 7:28:36 AM
thank you so much stan, take care. I would love to check out your pictures and will do so tomorrow.
peace and love
susan
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Critique By:
susan scott (K:714)
7/22/2008 7:27:05 AM
oh gary and carmen, i really appreciate your comments. please feel free to do so anytime.
it took me 2 years to even look at these pictures again
i really am happy to share them. i loved her and still do. I want to show what a fighter she was.
peace and love
susan
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Critique By:
Billy Bloggs (K:51043)
7/21/2008 6:40:14 PM
This is a powerful image depicting the fragility of life. I sometimes work with elderly dementia patients and have often thought there's a good photo essay to be had. It's interesting to see the nail polish still being applied, giving the message that she hasn't given up on life. Might I suggest a tighter crop to concentrate on her (and the hands) more and a liitle increase in contrast. I find the left side of the image especially a bit distracting. Hope you don't mind.
Regards, Gary
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Critique By:
Carmen Fuchs (K:6967)
7/21/2008 6:14:59 PM
Excellent work. Avedon did a series of pictures when his dad was dying - I always thought it was so brave of both of them.
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Critique By:
Stan Ciszek (K:56854)
7/21/2008 4:18:37 AM
It's really lovely capture,Susan.
Regards,
Stan.
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Critique By:
Hussam AL_ Khoder (K:79545)
7/20/2008 4:56:11 PM
«´¨`.¸.*Nice photo*. ¸.´¨`»
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Critique By:
Saad Salem (K:89003)
7/20/2008 11:44:39 AM
if he dislike you in reality,he would never let you shot him,allowing you to do so,means he likes you,my regards,
Saad.
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Critique By:
susan scott (K:714)
7/18/2008 6:13:21 PM
thank you, today and always saad, to take the time, to comment on my pictures. I really appreciate your words. and descriptions. sorry for your loss as well. I do keep the memories as close as i can.
peace and love
susan
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Critique By:
Saad Salem (K:89003)
7/18/2008 8:21:00 AM
Hi Susan,you are so courageous to dare take a photo for a relative dying person,who for one reason or an other doesn't want her face to appear in the photo,from her pose in the photo,I guess she thinks, she is not well prepared for the shot,but look to her in this particular shot,she have her nails painted,she is wearing her jeweleries,and a tow rings in tow fingers,and I think she is sitting in front of mirror,at the very same time she is wearing the hospital label of illness,and in front of her there are many medicines and fluids related to her illness,plus an oxygen or fluid tube connected to her nose or mouth,
I have prescribed the photo in full details to reach my point,that she is brave enough to know that she is leaving to some place,and she intensionally imagined that this place will be a party of some kind,and she is to be prepared well for this party by her makeup and nice looking,may be she avoid looking to the camera to preserve her nice looking face to the others who appreciate such look from a departing face, I hope I have her courage and her well prepared departure ,cancer is one way of ending life among many,and only braves and those having faith will defy it,
sorry for your loss and mine,and keep the good memories,
my best regards,Saad.
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Critique By:
Sophie King (K:3250)
7/18/2008 6:48:15 AM
wow thats quite confronting. nice documentary
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Critique By:
Wolf Zorrito (K:78768)
7/18/2008 6:24:59 AM
Very shocking photo, the more shocking it is for her.
I wish her light and love wherever she may be.
Harry
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Critique By:
Johancharles Boers (K:4370)
7/18/2008 6:18:20 AM
Susan H,
Wow you really have powerful picture story going here...great job on documenting this emotional event.
Best Wishes,
Chuck
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Critique By:
susan scott (K:714)
7/18/2008 5:24:55 AM
Thank you B, i'm sorry about your father. so many of us are losing loved ones to this disease. its just horrible. please check out my prfolio named. "aunt june" there are more of her face and eyes. and i will take your advice and post more of the older pictures of her. well there are some of her before, but i'll post some from way before. Thanks for the advice.
peace and love
susan
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Critique By:
susan scott (K:714)
7/18/2008 5:20:10 AM
thank you mitra. I do keep her close to my heart. Then i remember things or hear a song and out of no where, i will just break down crying..
I am so sorry about your mother! that must have been horrible. I can't imagine that.
I really appreciate you writing to me. thank you so much.
peace and love
susan
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Critique By:
susan scott (K:714)
7/18/2008 5:16:03 AM
thank you so much michele for your comments. It makes me happy when someone takes the time to write a comment or/and critique. I really to appreciate it, always. sometimes i feel like i'm invisible.
peace and love
susan
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Critique By:
. B (K:1815)
7/18/2008 4:39:18 AM
Susan this is a nice tribute to your Aunt. Cancer is such an unforgiving disease but don't let it get the best of you. I lost my father from cancer a few years ago, but always think about the positive about him. Your aunt knows you think of her often and miss her!
Technically about the photograph of her, I do wish you would show one with her face and eyes, esp. with the disease she has. She didn't want her picture taken? or? I hope perhaps you can show us the person she was! Thanks for sharing such an intimate time for both of you.
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Critique By:
Michele Carlsen (K:146013)
7/18/2008 4:23:27 AM
A perfect title - excellent emotional reaction and attitudes -
Take care Susan,
Hugs, Michele!
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Critique By:
Michele Carlsen (K:146013)
7/18/2008 4:20:24 AM
Dear Susan I am so sorry for your loss - Thank You for sharing it here with us - we do care ....
Sad and brave image - brings much strong emotions .
Hugs,
Michele~
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