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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
1/31/2007 8:33:00 AM
After looking through your series of shots with Jennifer and Christy I detect something kind of uneasy in Jennifer's expressions, perhaps it's because she is posed to face more directly into the camera than Christy. Jennifer looks bolder, her mouth and eyes are not as relaxed as Christy. Maybe in future shoots you can use this to your advantage. Please don't take any of this negatively, I think this is a fantastic series of shots, keep doing what you do...
Aaron
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Photo By: Paul Lara
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/21/2006 11:18:19 PM
Steve,
I would have liked to have taken a longer exposure but didn't have a tripod or ND filter with me. The tree on the left is quite tall, probably 35-45 feet, I can't remember exactly.
Aaron
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| Photo By: Aaron Doss
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/20/2006 6:36:00 AM
Jim, It was quite dark (nearly black), the rocks on the left are illuminated via moonlight which is much colder in color, that explains the cold color cast.
Aaron
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| Photo By: Aaron Doss
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/18/2006 11:37:37 PM
wow that is bright!
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| Photo By: Kralik Dr Jaroslav
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/18/2006 2:17:55 AM
Marc, great shot. How did you get the 4 stop ND filter to blend so well? Did you have to recover any detail afterwards? I usually get some drastic color shift if I use a 4 stop grad. Are you using a Singh Ray filter?
Aaron
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| Photo By: Marc Adamus
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/14/2006 8:57:44 PM
your work is amazing Fadel. I have looked through all of your portfolio, you have a real talent.
Aaron
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| Photo By: Fadel J
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/14/2006 9:32:20 AM
This is a good one, both warm and cool colors combined, and very clean.
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/13/2006 10:43:59 PM
Truly remarkable image then.
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| Photo By: Douglas Ritchie
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/13/2006 10:42:28 PM
good details and layered comp. Clouds, mountains, snow, cliffs, fields, trees and lines this image has a bit of everything for the eye, it works for me.
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| Photo By: Joggie van Staden
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/13/2006 10:39:43 PM
I like the comp a lot but think that it needs more negative space (sand). I feel that if there was more sand and less twig it would emphasize the twig even more, and give the image even more breathing space.
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| Photo By: Leo Régnier Я£
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/13/2006 10:35:42 PM
I personally would like to see more details in the dark areas of the image, too much contrast for me. The composition and subject are great.
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| Photo By: Giulio Rotelli
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/13/2006 10:25:24 PM
very interesting place.
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| Photo By: AAT SA
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/13/2006 10:18:31 PM
Great image, good composition. How did the sky get black?
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| Photo By: Bogdan Lutostanski
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/13/2006 10:14:32 PM
wow this looks like a painting with the colors in the sky, beautiful. Did you need to use blending or HDR processes?
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| Photo By: Douglas Ritchie
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/13/2006 10:12:05 PM
wonderfully light photo
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| Photo By: Radmila Gorjanovic
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/13/2006 8:57:47 PM
Simply amazing, one of your best images and you have a lot of good ones. Man, you spend a lot of time outdoors, and it shows in your images.
Aaron
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| Photo By: Marc Adamus
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/13/2006 5:47:48 AM
simple and fairly clean. I like it.
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| Photo By: Nelson Moore [Kes] -
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/13/2006 5:44:27 AM
I actually think this would make a good stock photo. It's a good capture.
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| Photo By: murat sinen
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/13/2006 5:42:30 AM
Interesting, what exactly is this a picture of?
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| Photo By: Rich Swanner
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/13/2006 5:40:58 AM
I would try cropping the image down more. I like the green and the shroom, the blurred out foreground is a bit distracting.
my honest opinion.
Aaron
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| Photo By: Francisco N-G
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/12/2006 9:24:03 PM
Interesting shift from warm on the left to cold blue sky on the right. When I first saw the thumbnail I thought it was some kind of photoshopped gradient effect. When I saw the image larger it's true nature came out. Nice capture.
Aaron
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| Photo By: Wojciech Wandzel
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/12/2006 9:21:35 PM
nice sky, good use of the polarizer.
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| Photo By: Wojciech Wandzel
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/12/2006 9:15:41 PM
great saturated colours
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| Photo By: Joggie van Staden
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/12/2006 8:22:17 PM
I like the mist/light fog, it differentiates this shot from a lot of other mountain/reflection images. The warm glow is fantastic, really contrasts the cool blue of the snow and fog. Very Galen Rowell, reminds me of his evolution basin series of photos from the Sierras. (though a colder version).
Aaron
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| Photo By: Marc Adamus
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/12/2006 8:13:40 PM
Marc, thanks for the grad tip. I think you are right. I tried reducing the effect of the grad filter by lightening it in Photoshop. The result is attached, and I think it is better.
Thanks,
Aaron
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| Photo By: Aaron Doss
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/12/2006 9:09:41 AM
Rodrigo, thanks for the comments, I like your gallery. As for this image, no HDR processing was done. I used a ND Grad filter, USM and some adjustment of levels in photoshop. Attached is the image straight from the camera (unprocessed).
Aaron
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| Photo By: Aaron Doss
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/12/2006 6:35:27 AM
The filter system use consists of a Cokin P type holder (85mm width) and a rectangular resin filter. Don't bother with the screw on type as they are non adjustable. The resin filter I have is made by Hitech. Although the Hitech filter is not really neutral, it's much better than the Cokin brands.
I should have purchased "Singh Ray" brand filters before doing my long trip as they are almost neutral. see http://www.singh-ray.com/grndgrads.html
I like your gallery by the way.
hope this helps.
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| Photo By: Aaron Doss
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/11/2006 1:19:41 AM
Simple, clear and perfect. One has to look hard to find such photographs. Congratulations
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| Photo By: Christian Barrette
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/11/2006 12:16:29 AM
I like the sepia version better..
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| Photo By: Dave Arnold
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Critique By:
Aaron Doss (K:121)
12/11/2006 12:00:23 AM
Congrats on the deserved photo of the day. it has a fantastic glow.
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| Photo By: Thomas Gorman
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