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Critique By:
Paul Lara (K:88111)
1/6/2007 9:40:59 PM
Nice balance and composition, Jarrod.
I have to tell you that you shoot well beyond your years might indicate. You've got a GOOD eye!
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1/1/2007 4:48:52 AM
This is a great place to learn, look hard at what you see. This is a great picture, I like the different colors and shades, then man adds interest, great perspective, excellent job.
I like to walk around and look at things in different perspectives. Good luck with your future.
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Critique By:
Mark Drago (K:10902)
9/27/2004 2:42:56 PM
very good
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Critique By:
. . (K:92)
9/24/2004 8:19:39 PM
Hey, you never showed me this. Well the only thing I can say is Kudos! I know what you mean by 'delightful mistake'.
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DK PERRYMAN PHOTOGRAPHY (K:65)
2/1/2004 10:47:07 PM
Hey Jarrod did you get your answer for photography grants? if so please let me know where I can go to get one or two for my son of 17........ cheers
DK Perryman Photography..........oh by the way that shot of yours is great!
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Critique By:
Harlan Heald (K:15732)
11/19/2003 12:45:12 PM
Interesting composition! Wonderful capture and excellent technical work to yield a fine image. Great "linger power!"
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stephan scott (K:6)
10/29/2003 7:54:10 AM
very good technique
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Rhonda Prince (K:17687)
10/14/2003 1:17:01 PM
It did work out fine, better than fine! The only thing I would correct is the tilt on the platform. But definitely leave in the man on the right, in my opinion anyway. Thanks for the comment, rhonda
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Critique By:
Chris Lauritzen (K:14949)
10/9/2003 2:12:09 PM
Jarrod,
If you want to my email address in in my bio, feel free to email me with any questions that you might have. Also we have a bunch of us USEFILM members that live in the Chicago area and we get together and spen the day talking, shooting, talking and having a good time.
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Critique By:
sandy c. hopkins (K:17107)
10/8/2003 12:33:32 PM
great photo
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Critique By:
nothing nothing (K:557)
10/2/2003 9:15:24 AM
Thank you Kelly. And yes, it is Chicago the Belmont stop on the red line. I have a point and shoot now so I am going to move on to bigger and better things.
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Critique By:
Kelly Anbach (K:4375)
9/30/2003 6:09:04 PM
Jarrod, for a point and shoot camera you have talent! This is pretty well composed. The only thing I would have done is cropped it just a tad as it is slightly crooked - or it's an optical illusion. At any rate - keep shooting! Is this Chicago? TERRIFIC!
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Critique By:
nothing nothing (K:557)
9/30/2003 9:42:14 AM
Thank you Ralph I dont mind at all. I was speaking to a photographer the other day and he said the same thing but with one adjustment. He said I should keep the man that smoking in there and take out all the dark space. Please post and say what you think I should crop or correct.
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Critique By:
Ralph Berrett (K:561)
9/29/2003 9:35:53 PM
The image is very good as well the photoshop work. The only thing I would is crop tighter. I hope you don't mind, I did a little tightger crop. I used the light posts more as a framing tool. I felt the stuff on the side was a distraction and it took away from the composition. This just a very minor suggestion. Nice work.
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Critique By:
RUI FLÓRIDO GONÇALVES (K:845)
9/29/2003 1:34:54 PM
Jarrod. I like this photo. regs
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Critique By:
Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia (K:96391)
9/29/2003 12:53:52 PM
beautiful tones.
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Jonathan Wilson (K:591)
9/26/2003 12:04:43 AM
i like it, it feels like im spying on someone and a whole city, good work
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Critique By:
Chris Lauritzen (K:14949)
9/23/2003 8:13:16 AM
Jarrod,
Nice capture here, the lighting is good as is the comp. The horzion is tilted and that throws off the image but reading your comments I understand why it happened. Welcome to USEFILM and keep shooting.
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