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Critique By:
Elangovan S (K:10675)
6/18/2004 3:37:17 AM
Matej, Great abstract and diagonal & very balanced composition. Excellent job. How did you get the shadow as that much darker shade?
But what the heck is this? I tried to see at 90degree to the right... couldnt figure it? :-) are you seeing down? Well... me likey.
Elangs.
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Photo By: Matej Maceas
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Critique By:
Elangovan S (K:10675)
4/3/2004 9:24:28 PM
Asim...
I just quickly looked at your portfolio. This is your daughter, right? You might have emotional attachment to this picture. However, as a viewer of this image this is what I feel, and is purly my personal opinion.
Couple of things to note -
- This is much like a bull'e eye composition. The subject's face (eyes) is at the very much center of the picture. Hmmm... This location where you shoot is the right opportunity to keep the subject in a one of the thirds. In this case, I would have setup the subject where the left and center 3rds are intersecting - if I wanted to shoot w/o fill flash, because the light is coming from the right side of the frame. Even though she is in the open shade still the light is directional. For an alternate composition, the subject could be positioned at the intersection of right and center 3rd and use fill flash to kick it up a bit.
- secondly, there is nice bit of room in the picture, I wouldnt have cropped her like that. But thats just individuals choice. But as a thumb rule, dont crop at the joints (such as knee, ankles and such) of the subject.
The film that you used an awesome film. I just love 'em.
Keep shooting. Have fun.
Elangs.
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