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Critique By:
Joe Johnson (K:8529)
6/26/2009 2:55:58 AM
As CC, I'd say good expression, and she overwhelms any background - because her posture and expression are interesting. She's demanding attention. Still there's a lot there and maybe a crop would isolate things better. It's a classic 'A-frame' composition.
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| Photo By: Pablo Dylan
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Critique By:
Joe Johnson (K:8529)
9/2/2006 1:16:26 PM
It's a little soft, say her face, the front of the scale, and closest orange, other than her hand. That can be sharpened in software if one wished. But it's interesting because you are playing a repeated theme, and emphasizing it by the use of light; almost as if using spotlights. It's the A-frame composition, which is natural for the body. But it also natural for the scale. In addition, the placement of the oranges shows it, yet again, or at least extends the 'A' from both the child and the scale.
In addition, there is the report of what she is doing, suggesting innocence and curiosity. How many of these weights equal a banana and apple?
And of course, though reduced and unstated by your use of light, even the strip background (of a curved bureau?) shows an interesting texture. Everything seems to be there, in this photo, for a reason, in other words - which is a principle of a good photograph.
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| Photo By: Radmila Gorjanovic
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