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john amore
{K:14015} 1/29/2004
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good job lots of drama
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Daniel Knutsen
{K:3871} 10/13/2003
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This one is really cool!
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PIOTR KOWALIK
{K:1185} 10/2/2003
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some feelings are there..or maybe some pain ..good. pk .
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LV
{K:480} 9/29/2003
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This is a great photo on many levels. I like the moody and tense atmosphere brought about by the sharp lighting, deep shadows, and the power of the girl's expression. There is a lot of mystery behind this expression. The though that comes to mind when I look at this picture is a girl fallen from grace. She looks vulnerable with the way she holds her hands together clsoe to her naked body. I can see a combination of loneliness and sorrow in her expression. Her expression is what instantly grabs and captures the viewer.
One thing I do have to criticize is the composition. I feel the viewer wants to see more of what is behind her, and what she is walking from. Therefore it might be best to include more to the left of the picture. Here is what I had in mind, with my revised version. I hope you like it.
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![](http://thumbs.imageopolis.com/CritiqueImages/0/0/1-TN.jpg)
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bj burrows
{K:334} 8/31/2003
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this lil' version isnt my best due to the size of the file ... but its fun anyways
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![](http://thumbs.imageopolis.com/CritiqueImages/0/0/5-TN.jpg)
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John Strazza
{K:11535} 8/29/2003
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again, excellent ....
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Leyla Gamze Ozdemir
{K:2424} 8/25/2003
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Mia Hargreave
{K:790} 8/20/2003
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BEAUTIFUL
MIA:)
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André Bermak
{K:14443} 8/19/2003
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Ótima captura em P&B!!!!!
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Freddie Sandström
{K:1444} 8/19/2003
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I just had to have one more look. Really like this one. Don't know why.
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deniz kaan copur
{K:12726} 8/19/2003
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well done.
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ana ribeiro
{K:21290} 8/19/2003
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good portrait !
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Freddie Sandström
{K:1444} 8/19/2003
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It's a graceful model you've found. Her posture is powerful yet vulnerable. I just love those chello-type tattoos that pops out around her belly. You've also succeeded in enhancing the black. The contrast is on the edge of being too much but this picture needs it. As much as I need to look at it!
/Freddie
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Debra Griffin-Ibrahim
{K:7119} 8/19/2003
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Very Nice Image!!!
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{K:16329} 8/19/2003
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Vulnerably valuable. Nice image!
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Misti Morris
{K:177} 8/19/2003
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always loved this one!
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Erhan Astam
{K:333} 8/19/2003
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I loved long hair and sad look. Atmosphere and tatoos are matching. Good Picture, one of my favorites now. congrats
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