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Beth Lasoff
{K:539} 12/17/2003
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Cool effects...like the color.
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B:)liana
{K:30945} 12/17/2003
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I dont like the color of the background but effective anyway ;-)
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Ryan Blades
{K:623} 12/17/2003
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Looks like a good learning effort my friend! :) Keep up the hard work, and keep challenging yourself and learning at the same time!
It's not the tools that you have, its what you can do with what you have
Ryan~
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Thomas Birish
{K:348} 12/16/2003
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more imperfections...The green circles that aren't on the bottle are the imperfections. 2 of which are light streaks created by the cheap light bulbs and one is a dark spot on the left which might actually be the corner of the plexiglass which is a very unproffessional mistake... The 2 green circles on the bottle are just to point out a little smiley face and a frowney face I noticed while examining this picture.
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Tracey MacFadden
{K:1066} 12/16/2003
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thats really cool. i love the lighting.
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Thomas Birish
{K:348} 12/16/2003
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In responce to Herman, I agree. The bedsheet is still a little too noticeable. I actually hadn't been paying attention to what it looked like under the plexiglass, I was more concerned with the background portion of it. One thing that might have helped would have been an iron. The bedsheet is a bit wrinkled and it was hard to work with like that, plus I didn't pull it tight enough to remove more of the wrinkle. That's still one thing I'm learning...to look at ALL of the details. The more I look at my pictures, the more I notice how imperfect they are, but that helps me improve them. Thanks a lot for pointing out the bedsheet in the lower part of the picture. I failed to notice that before. Another imperfection is that I don't think the color skeem works well with Jack Daniels. It would be a bit more suiting to a coconut rum or something, but JD was on the menu for the evening so I worked with what I had.
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Harry Eggens
{K:14804} 12/16/2003
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Wonderful creative work with beautiful colors and reflection. The backdrop has about the same color as my face after drinking a bottle of JD.....lol......Thanks for the great discription of how you did made this image Thomas....Best regards Harry
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Hermen Pen
{K:9168} 12/16/2003
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I hope the bottle wasn't full when you started :) Original colour combination, I think there is still a little bit too much focus on the bed sheet in the lower part. (It still looks a little bit too much as a bed sheet, if you understand what I mean). Thanks for explaining your setup, it is a good example for all of us who want to learn from each other.
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Jose Ignacio (Nacho) Garcia Barcia
{K:96391} 12/16/2003
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original.magnificent composition.
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