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Asher Khan
{K:1459} 4/14/2004
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Great photo, however either my eyes are tricking me a little or plane of focus is on jacket rather than face and eyes, may be a bit deeper focus or a smaller aperture setting would have helped a little. All said great model and excellent portrait.
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Ahmed J
{K:6014} 4/14/2004
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very good portrait, the good things, her pose, your angel, composition is very good..i dont feel that forced smile. beautiful model. but bad thing is just low light source and u might needed more powerful flash otherwise more natural light source. but everything seems complete (for my taste) except lighting. well done and keep up. thanks
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Stephen Bowden
{K:64141} 4/14/2004
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The flash worked great on her jacket but missed her hair and face Drew. But it is still a good capture - 7's from me :-)
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Drew Brashler
{K:750} 4/14/2004
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Hey Ron, thanks for your comment. I actuilly did use a flash. It did such a great job it looks like natural lighting. Do you have any suggestions with using flashes outdoors, any specific type, placement, other gear. E-mail me back at drew.brashler@comcast.net. Thank you sir.
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Ron Beezley
{K:2834} 4/14/2004
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Drew next time use a fill flash to help accent her features and add some sparkle to her eyes. I never take a portrait outdoors without fill flash, even if it is a baseball team. Her pose is fine but her smile looks a little forced. Tell her to softly grin and it will make her look more natural won't show distortion of the facial muscles... Keep praticing you'll get it... thumbs up!
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