No not at all,I understand the idea your looking for but in my opinion i think i like seeing a little of where hes landing and whats he coming off of. But thanks alot for your comments and suggestions.
now, bear in mind i have no idea what i'm doing... to me this one makes the viewer think alot more, as you can't see the ground, you have no idea of how long or high he's going, this may not be the idea your after, but to me it adds depth and stuff to it, and the trees in the background suggest some REAL height is happening here like it? just ok? or am i completly off track??? i dunno hoe bmx shots are usually shot ao let me know if i just made a fool of myself k ;)
Glenn, Do you have any of different angles? like Andy suggested, a bit closer and diff types of angles, eg from up on the wall, or even squatting on that box thing in the middle, getting the shadow in etc, i don't know how this move is done so that last one could possibly be in the way. i have a suggestoin of a crop, it's a real tight one of him, come in from the right side....stuff this i'll just show ya...2 secs
Come on folks, please start taking the time to say something if you're going to rate somebody's work this low. Its not fair to the people that took the time to try and contribute something to the site. What's it take, maybe 30 seconds to put something in writing?
Nice job with the stop action, Glenn. However, I see a bit of a red cast in the color balance. I think also to have been more effective, a more close-up shot would have been nice. Still, overall its nice work.
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