I have to agree with Betsy about the yellow being so strong. A slight shift to the right and the colors would be a little more balanced by introducing a bit more green. This is still a very nice abstract as is. Nice job. aj
Very bold, graphic image. I love the strong, pure colors. I'd move the camera a bit so that the white line is not so close to the center. I think I'd move a little more to the right because the yellow is so strong it could stand to be less dominant, and I'd kind of like to see more of the green thing (I'm wondering what it is, a window frame, sign or ?). The texture in the yellow is a nice addition. Good eye
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{K:15732} 5/12/2003