I would use similar lighting myself Dan, so I like the effect. The model is very toned and the contrast of light and shade could really show us the contours of her body to full effect. I would like to see more of your work with this model. She has a great face too, some close up portraits would be interesting. Well done you have a style that is very apparent in your work so far. Regards Ricky.
I think...And this may only be me... The light is a little too hot. The angle and attitude of the light is great. Also, fill the frame. Show us the model. It's for her portfolio? then she should be the subject, not your artistic interpretations. Sorry if I seem a little harsh. Shyfox