this is an interesting series. it's unfortunate that it's gotten so little attention. you might experiment with distance, moving the camera closer and farther away to see whether the abstraction gets more interesting or less. of those you've posted, i like this the best, with a section torn away. i like how the tear is not entirely clean, but leaves a litlte emulsion at the ragged edge in some places. you might get more comments if you commented more on others' work. you may not write english well, but a few well-chosen and insightful words may bring grateful members to look at your work.
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