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Ken Alexander
{K:3905} 8/15/2002
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I think I like the new one better, but it's too small to really tell, and besides, I'm one day closer to senility than I was yesterday.
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Jennifer Newton
{K:32} 8/15/2002
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opps, I think I the one that's senile
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Jennifer Newton
{K:32} 8/15/2002
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Thanks for the imput. Here's a slightly different angle, more bridge. Let me know what you think.
Jen
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Ken Alexander
{K:3905} 8/14/2002
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It's really very good; you captured a mood instead of just depicting a bridge. To make it even better, I would agree with Russ (so apparently he's mistaken--he's not quite senile yet), you need to move away from the bridge so the angle doesn't seem so harsh, which conflicts a little with the overall mood.
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Russell Love
{K:7006} 8/14/2002
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Jennifer,
I have looked at this a couple of times and not commented but I keep coming back to it. I like the softness the fog gives the shot but I think the cold hardness of the bridge should be used also. Maybe a filter such as a yellow #2 would give it the umph that I was talking about. Or maybe less side shot and more upstream from the bridge. But I'm a senile of fart, so who knows? Keep after it!!!
Russ
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Jennifer Newton
{K:32} 8/14/2002
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Abstract Architecture they both start with A's.
Anybody notice I don't proof very well??
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Larry Edwards
{K:843} 8/14/2002
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I don't think this qualfies as an abstract, but its' a very nice shot. I like the way the bridge fades into the fog, and the fog into white. I'd like to see how this would look on a good print.
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