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Mark Williams
{K:1016} 2/6/2004
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Both images are good...I like the B&W version better because I can see your other eye behind the camera...good shadow detail there. I do not like the strap hanging next to your face. The light is very nice across your shoulders and the image is very sharp. I agree with Ronald about the claw look of your other hand under the camera. Hands are always tough to photograph. I did a little sharpening with the unsharp mask and took the image down a little with levels. I personally like my images a little on the darker side to hold the highlights and let the shadows fall where they are. More of an art print!!
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Dina Marie
{K:-1410} 1/27/2004
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I like the second one best. A very strong shot.
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sandy c. hopkins
{K:17107} 12/20/2003
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i like them both..
the one in the comment box is a tad more striking while the one above is more soothing..
i am up late aren;t i?
well, tis saturday and i just can;t seem to sleep..so much on the mind.
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Ronald Harmon
{K:612} 12/17/2003
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This is striking to say the least. And from this I have learned that you must be the model in all of your male photos. I can say that you are one really healthy looking dude. I thought you were using a model the whole time.
I like this and I like the fact it is "pulled over" to the right, I feel makes it strong. The lens of the camera sort of gives and interesting focal point too. Interesting!
The only thing that I find that is bothersome is the way you finger the lens with the lower hand. I would like to see it more with the hand kind of open so more fingers would have shown. As it is now your two fingers on the lens gives a feeling of a claw. BUT it is a real nice shot.
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Pat Fruen
{K:12076} 12/17/2003
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Well done. I like the second one better, but they're both nice. I like the off center composition and the lighting. Good work!
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sandy c. hopkins
{K:17107} 12/16/2003
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great lighting and structure micheal...looks quite commerical which is good...
..thanks for the great rendition you did of the the little girl...hope all has been well with you..
happy holidays!
:)
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Michael Grace-Martin
{K:10183} 12/16/2003
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Does this version look significantly better to anyone? Thanks.
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Kenneth Car
{K:5704} 12/16/2003
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NO blur here. In fact the sharp focus is great as is the composition. And your bicep looks great too : )
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Dylan Ricci
{K:861} 12/16/2003
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Beautiful tonal range. The light adores your skin.
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Uldra Johnson
{K:683} 12/15/2003
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Nice! Aloha, Uldra
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