no, I looked at your other photos to this project again and I don't think it's bad... the photos are good and you visualized the projects theme with talent and expression!!
maybe what's missing in an individual touch of her... what I mean is, the models charackter doesn't come out that good, her originality, her own personality... You just caputured her action in one day... but every day is different and somehow that is missing... Think, you should answer the question, what this special day makes it so special... What's on her mind? What does she think about? Is there anything that stresses her? Is there a relationship with problems? Or is everything just perfect? Does she live alone? Does she have a pet? What kinda music does she listen to?
:-) I just thought, if you bring thoses questions into your photos and they can tell a story of just one day, it's much better...
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{K:88111} 11/30/2004