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Salvador Marķa Lozada
{K:69375} 12/10/2005
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Beautiful portrait, Amalia. A expression very well captured.Very nice colors.Congrats.
Salvador
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Dmitriy Margolin
{K:2351} 4/4/2005
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Very good portrait!! VEry well done !
I would crop a little bit - get closer to a girl - so her head would be above the center of the photo.
Thank you on the comments for my work!
I really appreciate this!!
BEST TO YOU AND GOOD LUCK !!
Dmitriy
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Zeev Scharf
{K:25603} 4/2/2005
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Very nice portrait Amalia,excellent soft focus on the subject,the foreground is superb
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Amalia Setiawati
{K:712} 4/2/2005
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thanks for your comment,nic!!
I need to improve my capability...
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gus tinov
{K:419} 3/31/2005
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Atur holding cameranya, kalo perlu fill flash ama blitz, atau pake tripod biar gak goyang, konsep framingnya sih OK, cuman perlu diatur ke blurannya aja, :)
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N M
{K:4879} 3/30/2005
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Nice idea in framing the girl with the branches, just too bad that both the subjects, the girl and the branches are somewhat out of focus. You might want to try a bit of a tighter crop in order to really make the subject stand out. One way to do that would be to crop off some from the top, where there's quite a lot unwanted emptiness. Experiment and find out what suits you best. I'll iclude a suggestion for the framing.
Kind regards,
Niclas
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Some cropping & adjustments, not necesserily for the best =) |
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Lukasz Rzepinski (Łukasz Rzepiński)
{K:1211} 3/30/2005
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There is a concept in it but go on further on your way to perfect portrait :)
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