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Caterina Berimballi
{K:27299} 7/4/2006
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What? No photo art? ;D Love this comp. I think it's pretty much spot on. Quite like Paul's tweaks too. I'm fascinated with boats and have a squillion images of the harbour, but I get the feeling the UF crowd are hard to please on this subject...
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Riny Koopman
{K:102911} 7/2/2006
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The composition is pleasing as well,great summer feeling,all the best my good friend,riny
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Gayle's Eclectic Photos
{K:91109} 7/2/2006
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Ok,i think i see a teensy change...you made the white sails more white crisp? not sure how to change that in paintshop since the black n' white pts. adjustments only work for B/W...select and do levels? Shootin' film doesn't allow any white balance changes in-camera so whatever the sun casts on the sails is what i get...a color balance to blue might change the white sails,but will have to give it a go...Thanks for taking the time to fiddle with my image,brat ;>
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Kathy Hillard
{K:25721} 7/2/2006
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The perfect summer scene it is Gayle! Good colors, and the dark greens of the background set this off well.
Kathy
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Phillip Minnis
{K:13131} 7/2/2006
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Oh, Gayle, what a lovely scene! Wonderful colours, great comp! A pleasure to view!
Cheers
Phil
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 7/1/2006
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Ok, now that I'm back from the movies...a critique:
I think your framing is right on. The sailboat is nested nicely in the shot, with plenty of room to 'sail into'. I like the crop at the top, too, showing the treetops and making me want to see beyod the distant trees.
Only issue is your white balance is a bit too warm and the white levels are too low.
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Nelson Moore [Kes] -
{K:20241} 7/1/2006
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Hi Gayle, nice colors here with the fuji. Looks like a nice place.
Kes
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Kamran Bakhtiari
{K:24036} 7/1/2006
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peace time,happy summer,nice sea texture and
composition,sunny GG
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Gayle's Eclectic Photos
{K:91109} 7/1/2006
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what a brat you are! "Critique away"! ;>
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 7/1/2006
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Straight-up photo? So...this means I'm allowed to comment on it? ;)~
I like it.
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Paul Lara
{K:88111} 7/1/2006
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Straight-up photo? So...this means I'm allowed to comment on it? ;)~
I like it.
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