Lovely mood captured here, but it looks a touch too bight on one side, and a little dark on the other though. Great expressive moment though. Please stop by and critique my work - thankyou.
This presents a nice moment of contemplation. The hairlight works very well, but I'd like to see less highlight on camera left and a touch more on camera right. Still, the mood here is exactly right. Maybe the changes would decrease the impact of the image. Good job, makes me want to try a portrait.