Just another of the pictures that I took for this set. I am not sure with one is stronger or the mistakes on each one. It's hard for me to recognize errors since I was the one that took them and my point of view is subjective. Well, i hope you like this one.:)
of your two "yellow" pictures, I think the first has better clarity and light (altough you could increase DOF slightly), and the second has better overall composition and pose (for my taste, of course), but it is a bit too dark and slight unsharp. But I light both pictures a lot, just looking forward for more. :)
This second shot is very nice, I can see your eyes too ;) I like the pose, the expression and the golden reflections on your pretty face. I am conscious of the difficulties of a self, but you have the advantage to have always the model at your disposal ;) Bye Max
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{K:-53658} 9/30/2004
